the sorry fate of a creative mind

Friday, September 24, 2010
this one was written when mom forced me to study when I didn't have any intention to do so:P


dear mom academics ain't my field
creativity is where my fortunes yield
when you cry i should get marks
my head explodes with booms and sparks
but if you force me i shall read
yo your desire i shall always heed
but just know that you have subdued
a mind that should have been differently used
you capture it in a cage of reputation
it cant open its wings to reach its ambition
someday the burning desire may die out
you probably would be very proud
that my kid is a doctor, an engineer
but just know my life would be drear
you have managed to hold and bind
the sorry fate of a creative mind


22 comments:

  1. Prachi said...:

    Bravo!! Perfect! Love this!! Very good.. hope ur mom gets ur point!! This is really good.. :)

  1. Hiralarious said...:

    aww thnx prachi....bt m nt sure m gonna show it 2 mom soon enuf :P

  1. Atul Kr. Gupta said...:

    Mastt hai beta... keep it up. <3

  1. Anonymous said...:

    Nice poem Hiral, you write well......
    Best of luck for tomorrow!!!

  1. Unknown said...:

    awesome sister
    m proud 2 have u as my sis.....it also happens wid me....hope our moms understand

  1. Hiralarious said...:

    thnx saumey thts real supportive!
    thnx atul bhai n akash
    thnxiiieee pooo!!!!

    bt i wished manku bhai ws th first 2 comment....aftr all hes my inspiration naa

  1. Unknown said...:

    tht was pretty awesum!!!! u hv it in u to write more!!! use ur talent!!!!
    nd are u planning to shw ur mom this talented wrk of urs??? :P

  1. Hiralarious said...:

    LOL
    nt soon enuf ais...bt if she forces me more i wil probably have to :P

  1. I think i was probably the first one to read :D
    and last one to comment :(

    and this is one brilliantly written piece TB :)

  1. Hiralarious said...:

    you shall always be the first one 2 read...
    n m sorry i shud hav w8d fr u 2 cum bck :(

  1. Unknown said...:

    aaayyyeee......nyc 1......!!
    luv it.....!!!♥♥♥

  1. Unknown said...:

    waah waah.. waah waah..

  1. Hiralarious said...:

    thnx astha :P
    hope u like those pics too :P

  1. Anonymous said...:

    awesum!!! :P
    totally based on our lives!!! ;) :D

  1. Anonymous said...:

    wow! :">

    Its Perfect princess! <3

    \(^.^)/

    -Adzy ! = )

  1. Harish said...:
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  1. Hiralarious said...:

    thnxx chha malfoy choco n harish >:D<

  1. Unknown said...:

    very interesting :) how can you make it so effortless ;) ?

  1. Djamant said...:

    haha

    write at 1 in the night n u wil know ;)

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